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		<title>Comment on Publications by Slideshow from Publish Locally, Get Read Globally, March 26, 2011 — Essay Coaching</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Slideshow from Publish Locally, Get Read Globally, March 26, 2011 — Essay Coaching]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Mar 2011 20:37:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] class:  bowker.com writer&#8217;s market Quantcast author&#8217;s guild Robbie Dean Press my online publications Greg&#8217;s blog   View more presentations from [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] class:  bowker.com writer&#8217;s market Quantcast author&#8217;s guild Robbie Dean Press my online publications Greg&#8217;s blog   View more presentations from [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is Healing by andyglasser</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2010/11/23/writing-is-healing-duh/#comment-222</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[andyglasser]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2011 14:36:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Duh is right, but I am surprised to see that it helped with Asthma.  That is very encouraging.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Duh is right, but I am surprised to see that it helped with Asthma.  That is very encouraging.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Stephen King&#8217;s &#8220;Strong Poison&#8221; Blew Me Away by Andy Glasser</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2009/11/29/strong-poison-by-stephen-king-blew-me-away/#comment-221</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Andy Glasser]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2011 01:22:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hey Debbie - I&#039;ve working through both versions of his stories now, and I think it is criminal the extent to which Lish changed the stories.  He didn&#039;t just edit them, he often removed what the story was originaly about.  Interestingly though, for that particular story you mention, I liked the Lish ending.  It showed the desperation of the moment, the mother wanting to know if there was news about her son, but unknown to her she is just talking to the Baker.  In Lish&#039;s version, we don&#039;t know whether the son survives.  This is one of the few stories where I do really like the edited version, but that doesn&#039;t make it right.  In another one Carver&#039;s main character rapes a girl, then kills her to cover it up.  Carver sets it up and you understand how it happened.  But in Lish&#039;s version he and his friend are trying to pick up these two girls and then from out of nowhere and seemingly out of character one of them just kills both girls, including the &quot;one that was supposed to be&quot; for the other guy - that last line presumably added by Lish.  Where does he get off rewriting these stories?  It&#039;s interesting to see though from the perspective of rewriting, to see one person rewrite another&#039;s story.  In one particular instance Lish took a 10 page story to 2 pages.  I guess he didn&#039;t like it.

http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2007/12/24/071224fa_fact

here&#039;s the article I read that got me interested in this.  Not written by King, but a good article nonetheless.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Debbie &#8211; I&#8217;ve working through both versions of his stories now, and I think it is criminal the extent to which Lish changed the stories.  He didn&#8217;t just edit them, he often removed what the story was originaly about.  Interestingly though, for that particular story you mention, I liked the Lish ending.  It showed the desperation of the moment, the mother wanting to know if there was news about her son, but unknown to her she is just talking to the Baker.  In Lish&#8217;s version, we don&#8217;t know whether the son survives.  This is one of the few stories where I do really like the edited version, but that doesn&#8217;t make it right.  In another one Carver&#8217;s main character rapes a girl, then kills her to cover it up.  Carver sets it up and you understand how it happened.  But in Lish&#8217;s version he and his friend are trying to pick up these two girls and then from out of nowhere and seemingly out of character one of them just kills both girls, including the &#8220;one that was supposed to be&#8221; for the other guy &#8211; that last line presumably added by Lish.  Where does he get off rewriting these stories?  It&#8217;s interesting to see though from the perspective of rewriting, to see one person rewrite another&#8217;s story.  In one particular instance Lish took a 10 page story to 2 pages.  I guess he didn&#8217;t like it.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2007/12/24/071224fa_fact" rel="nofollow">http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2007/12/24/071224fa_fact</a></p>
<p>here&#8217;s the article I read that got me interested in this.  Not written by King, but a good article nonetheless.</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Virtual Life by Susan Knoppow</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2010/05/02/my-virtual-life/#comment-80</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Susan Knoppow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 20:44:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I stumbled on your blog ... now you can read mine too. Hope you enjoy!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I stumbled on your blog &#8230; now you can read mine too. Hope you enjoy!</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Virtual Life by Sarah Merion</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2010/05/02/my-virtual-life/#comment-78</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Merion]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 17:04:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good idea!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good idea!</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Virtual Life by debmerion</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2010/05/02/my-virtual-life/#comment-75</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[debmerion]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 02 May 2010 22:10:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[next up:
Laura McReynolds
http://www.facebook.com/l/ff1c2;theblog.lifeworkscoaching.com]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>next up:<br />
Laura McReynolds<br />
<a href="http://www.facebook.com/l/ff1c2;theblog.lifeworkscoaching.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.facebook.com/l/ff1c2;theblog.lifeworkscoaching.com</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on My Virtual Life by debmerion</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/2010/05/02/my-virtual-life/#comment-74</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[debmerion]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 02 May 2010 18:24:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[On deck for next posts:
Nita Sweeney
Bum Glue - http://bumglue.blogspot.com
about an hour ago · 

Greg Peters
The Reluctant Networker: http://thereluctantnetworker.com/
21 minutes ago ·]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On deck for next posts:<br />
Nita Sweeney<br />
Bum Glue &#8211; <a href="http://bumglue.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">http://bumglue.blogspot.com</a><br />
about an hour ago · </p>
<p>Greg Peters<br />
The Reluctant Networker: <a href="http://thereluctantnetworker.com/" rel="nofollow">http://thereluctantnetworker.com/</a><br />
21 minutes ago ·</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Story by Is It True Everyone Has a Book in Them? &#171; Write Through Doors</title>
		<link>http://debbiemerion.com/my-story/#comment-28</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Is It True Everyone Has a Book in Them? &#171; Write Through Doors]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Dec 2009 17:23:44 +0000</pubDate>
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